Best antagonist-Hermione story I’ve ever read.

But in the last chapter, things turn towards the cross-overy and get really weird. Some of it lacks explanations which other parts have, this could have been woven in better. I also have the feeling they get their spoils too easily… and what’s with the WTF way to interfere with actions though a viewing(!) sphere?

The dialogue problem from the first book is still pertinent, not as much though, and the language has somewhat improved as well.