The second book in this series is still written in present tense. It gets slightly worse though, as sentences dealing with the relative past are formed incorrectly.
The author’s A/Ns get worse, too.
Harry has some successes and otherwise keeps being his oblivious self.
And then, in the midst of a chapter, without this being recognisable, the author explodes the fourth wall, and the fifth to go with it, and switches to their PoV and basically deals with the rest of the year (which is just most of it) in a short bullet-point list and ends it. Just like that.
This is utterly insulting.
The only saving grace might be that the author hates Year 2 and might recover a bit for Year 3… might. But nothing of that is published yet.
Woah, going from five stars to one in just 10½ rather short chapters. (Even less, considering most …
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DE/EN*; lots of fanfiction, some books and sheet music.
Experimenting with Bookwyrm, to get away from Goodreads and a manually kept text file with things I read.
I mostly keep to the Goodreads rating scale (2 = it was okay, 3 = I liked it, 4 = I really liked it, 5 = top), where I also hand out a 2/3 for a 1/2 when my reason to dislike is more personal than caused by the book. Bad spelling tends to get a downgrade.
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mirabilos reviewed Harry Potter a tajemná komnata by J. K. Rowling
Review of 'Harry Potter a tajemná komnata' on 'Goodreads'
1 star
The second book in this series is still written in present tense. It gets slightly worse though, as sentences dealing with the relative past are formed incorrectly.
The author’s A/Ns get worse, too.
Harry has some successes and otherwise keeps being his oblivious self.
And then, in the midst of a chapter, without this being recognisable, the author explodes the fourth wall, and the fifth to go with it, and switches to their PoV and basically deals with the rest of the year (which is just most of it) in a short bullet-point list and ends it. Just like that.
This is utterly insulting.
The only saving grace might be that the author hates Year 2 and might recover a bit for Year 3… might. But nothing of that is published yet.
Woah, going from five stars to one in just 10½ rather short chapters. (Even less, considering most of the story was still good enough.) This has to be some kind of record.
mirabilos rated Don Quixote: 3 stars
Don Quixote by Miguel de Cervantes Saavedra
Widely regarded as the world's first modern novel, Don Quixote chronicles the famous picaresque adventures of the noble knight-errant Don …
mirabilos reviewed Winnetou I by Karl May
mirabilos rated Die drei??? Geisterstadt: 4 stars
Review of 'The Book of Woodcraft and Indian Lore' on 'Goodreads'
mirabilos rated Die drei ??? Hidden Fouls: 4 stars
mirabilos reviewed Lies In a Mirror by Peter Charleton
Review of 'Lies In a Mirror' on 'Goodreads'
3 stars
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Alternative edition of: www.goodreads.com/book/show/43790134-scales-of-change
2½ stars, but tonight’s Brexit is kinda fitting. Not the best writing, but overall made me smile. Also, Luna.
mirabilos rated Artemis Fowl - Die Akte: 4 stars
mirabilos reviewed Alice in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll
Review of 'Alice in Wonderland' on 'Goodreads'
3 stars
2½ stars, rounding up for story length (and even then, I’m generous)
At times hard to follow. Way too much romance. Tons of OCs, and a rather OOC Harry. Family Magic as a panacea, inconsistent enemies and inconsequent dealing with traitors in various kinds. I never understood where Bill stands in all this, till the ending (which wasn’t all that satisfying either), and other loose threads exist.
mirabilos reviewed Dao de jing by Laozi
Review of 'Lao Tzu' on 'Goodreads'
Commentary by Ursula K. Le Guin herself on this book: web.archive.org/web/20191125013821/https://www.brainpickings.org/2016/10/21/lao-tzu-tao-te-ching-ursula-k-le-guin/
mirabilos rated Lord Is My Shepherd: 4 stars
mirabilos rated Meitantei Konan: 4 stars
Meitantei Konan by Gōshō Aoyama
A high school boy, who is an excellent detective, is poisoned and shrunk to the size of a six-year old …
mirabilos rated Meitantei Konan: 3 stars
Meitantei Konan by Gōshō Aoyama
A high school boy, who is an excellent detective, is poisoned and shrunk to the size of a six-year old …
mirabilos reviewed Meitantei Konan by Gōshō Aoyama
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5 stars
Aaaaaaah, the suspense! It’s killing me!
Where did Shinichi’s Mom come into play here, anyway? She seems to have her own game going on in parallel, too… and the little guy doesn’t even know almost any of it…
At least I figured out who the “guest player” is… one page before it was revealt. But, hey!
And, who is Subaru? Also, why does nobody take out Bourbon, now that he’s revealed?
More importantly, “the detective known as ‘the sleeping Kogoro’” is now a point of interest ☹