Reviews and Comments

Interesting format. Read like a series of episodes of a TV series, where a problem is introduced and then wrapped up by the end of the hour. My problem was that the characters are all too nice. The intra-crew tension that would have led to interesting interactions was missing.

Too much coincidence. The only person who could possibly do the thing that needs to be done just happens to be right there, with exactly the things needed?

I liked the stylistic flourishes more than the structure of this.

Excellent. A classic fairy tale at heart, but with much better characters.

Gripping. Liked how well motivated many of the actions were.

Needed a more pressing crisis.

Interesting, but not outstanding. I found myself skimming through some of the description.