Atlas Six (2021, Doherty Associates, LLC, Tom)
English language
Published July 10, 2021 by Doherty Associates, LLC, Tom.
Me ha parecido espectacular, no sólo la evolución de la trama y el desarrollo de los personajes, si no el world building y EL SISTEMA DE MAGIA, POR FAVOR, ME PARECE FANTÁSTICA ESTA PERSPECTIVA. Pero. ¿A quién se le ocurre crear toda esa tensión tan de poquito a poco, aumentar la presión en la olla a vapor... Y cortar ahí? Es demasiado anticlimático y trunca muy repentinamente la narración.
Me ha parecido espectacular, no sólo la evolución de la trama y el desarrollo de los personajes, si no el world building y EL SISTEMA DE MAGIA, POR FAVOR, ME PARECE FANTÁSTICA ESTA PERSPECTIVA. Pero. ¿A quién se le ocurre crear toda esa tensión tan de poquito a poco, aumentar la presión en la olla a vapor... Y cortar ahí? Es demasiado anticlimático y trunca muy repentinamente la narración.
Written like bad streaming TV: mandatory "plot twists" clumsily done, drawing things out artificially, a rushed final episode, and introducing a shadowy character in the last shot to laugh menacingly.
Frustrating, like most Dark Academia books. It’s got some interesting ideas and moments, but the writing doesn’t sustain them. The magic system and world-building are underdeveloped. Is it a rule in this genre that magic users have to be assholes?
What world building! What a magic system! What a premise, & setting, I can't wait to find out more!
...and after the book just sort of fizzles out & ends, I'm still waiting.
The characters are all disappointing, particularly the women. The (annoying) Madonna, the (annoying) Whore, & the one who is also there. The fellas aren't a lot better. I feel like The Atlas Six could have been The Atlas Two, which would have made for far more interesting & complex characters to have boring conversations with each other.
Why though, why have daily classes that are never involved in the story? What's in them? Do the characters sit frozen & silent until later that evening when a boring conversation between two ppl happens?
Still, there's a bit of fucking & definitely some Gay Yearning ™️ so I didn't hate it. Love a bit of YA magic academy, wouldn't …
What world building! What a magic system! What a premise, & setting, I can't wait to find out more!
...and after the book just sort of fizzles out & ends, I'm still waiting.
The characters are all disappointing, particularly the women. The (annoying) Madonna, the (annoying) Whore, & the one who is also there. The fellas aren't a lot better. I feel like The Atlas Six could have been The Atlas Two, which would have made for far more interesting & complex characters to have boring conversations with each other.
Why though, why have daily classes that are never involved in the story? What's in them? Do the characters sit frozen & silent until later that evening when a boring conversation between two ppl happens?
Still, there's a bit of fucking & definitely some Gay Yearning ™️ so I didn't hate it. Love a bit of YA magic academy, wouldn't read any more in the series though.
